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[ Vadim Kotelnikov ]
Created:
1/4/11
Closing date:
1/24/11
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Type of improvement:
Error correction
Area of improvement:
Language
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Location:
http://fun4biz.com/messagesSubjects/list |
I received a message in my mailbox that a Fun4Bizer sent me an instant message. I clicked on the link that led to a page with the following message:
*************
403 Forbidden
You have not enough privileges for reading this objects
Пожалуйста, войдите на сайт
*************
There are too many mistakes in these three lines. |
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403 Forbidden - not required, to be removed
You have not enough privileges for reading this objects - Looks impolite and contains 3 grammar errors. To be replaced by Please login to read this message.
Пожалуйста, войдите на сайт - not required, to be removed. Alternativey, if we wish to translate the messages into other languages, no language should be excluded, i.e. the message should appear 1000+ times in all possible languages:-) |
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